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Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby Benn » Sat Apr 13, 2013 10:45 am

Because there isn't a place for it in the Intruder part of the forum, I shall put this in General Randomness.

I'm putting together an Intruder Fan Fiction piece, coming soon, but here are some excerpts:

RobStorm looked into MrOtton's eyes, and even though they were sworn enemies, you could see the sparkle in their eyes, that summer spent in the cabin in the woods together, it meant more than any damn package locked in the basement.

"Where has your friend gone with our package?" RobStorm placed two shiny silver balls on the table, linked with a black thread. SteelRaven7's eyes grew wide. He knew what he wanted to do with them. "I'm not going to ask you again." Part of SteelRaven7 didn't want him to.

More excerpts when I can be bothered to think of them :P

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby SteelRaven7 » Thu Apr 18, 2013 4:51 pm

SteelRaven7 wrote:*It's a mystery!* ¯\(ö_Ö)/¯


is how it really happened btw
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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby TheTwelfthTardis » Sat Jul 06, 2013 2:26 am

[quote="Benn"]Because there isn't a place for it in the Intruder part of the forum, I shall put this in General Randomness.

you could see the sparkle in their eyes, that summer spent in the cabin in the woods together, it meant more than any damn package locked in the basement.

Hmmmm. A bit suggestive there...

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby TheTwelfthTardis » Thu Jul 11, 2013 6:46 am

What the actual shit

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby DetectDefective » Thu Jul 11, 2013 6:47 am

TheTwelfthTardis wrote:What the actual shit

Gonna have to go with this, I've got no idea why my name's in it either. :|

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby TheTwelfthTardis » Fri Jul 12, 2013 9:44 pm

I think it would be pretty cool if someone wrote a fan fiction telling why everyone is fighting over the briefcase and why we're fighting over it.

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby underthedeep » Thu Jul 18, 2013 2:05 am

fan fiction...........


so like pornography right?

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby adwuga » Thu Jul 18, 2013 3:57 pm

I know I do!

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Re: Intruder Fan Fiction

Postby RefrigeratorGhost » Sat Aug 03, 2013 7:47 pm

Benn wrote:Because there isn't a place for it in the Intruder part of the forum, I shall put this in General Randomness.

I'm putting together an Intruder Fan Fiction piece, coming soon, but here are some excerpts:

RobStorm looked into MrOtton's eyes, and even though they were sworn enemies, you could see the sparkle in their eyes, that summer spent in the cabin in the woods together, it meant more than any damn package locked in the basement.

"Where has your friend gone with our package?" RobStorm placed two shiny silver balls on the table, linked with a black thread. SteelRaven7's eyes grew wide. He knew what he wanted to do with them. "I'm not going to ask you again." Part of SteelRaven7 didn't want him to.

More excerpts when I can be bothered to think of them :P


As a writer you should avoid using too much adverbs.

Like ''he looked'' "he said quickly'', etc.

I'm not a pro writer by any means, fuck I'm not even an amateur one, but it can make your shit look really amateur-ish.


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